Sabtu, 31 Mei 2014


My Girlfriend

            Do you feel alone? Do you feel sad? Are you feel confused with your life? Do you feel confuse to choose something? Do you feel bored with your activities? Do you know how to feel happy? How to feel easy to choose something? How to feel enjoy in your life?
            My girlfriend always makes me not to feel alone. She always makes me happy. She always makes me to laugh. My girlfriend makes me know what is true and what is false. From that I can choose what I want to choose. There are many activities that we have done together. From that activities that make us laugh until the activities that make us be sad together. From that, we know what is happy and what is sad.
            My girlfriend was born on 18th November 1995 in tabanan. So, she is 18th years old now. She is study in Undiksha. She lives at boarding house in Singaraja. I think, she is a smart person.
            My girlfriend is like angel for me. She is very beautiful. She is kind. She is intelligent. I met her on September 2013. When she borrow my book, that is firstly I saw her. That is the day when I feel very nervous.
            A lot of activities that we have learn together. Where we can feel happy and we can feel sad together. We always were enjoying doing activities. My girlfriend can makes my life to be colorful. I’m really love her. I wish we could always be toghether.

1 komentar:

  1. Hi Yogi,
    Actually, your writing is good but you need to pay attention more for the grammar like "Are you feel confused with your life?" should be "Do you feel confused with your life?", "A lot of activities that we have learn together" should be "A lot of activities that we have learned together".
    Overall, your writing is good and interesting....

    BalasHapus