Writing 2 Assignment

Outline of Widya’s post entitled “Free Hugs”

Topic Sentence                   : Free hug is an activity which hug other people to share

              our love and  happiness.

            (I think it should be “an activity which hugs” not “an activity which hug”)

1.      Major supporting sentence I            :

Ø  With hug, we can realize that many people care about us.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  Hug is one way to keep the togetherness in our society because we cannot life without the other people, and that’s why togetherness is very important for us.

2.      Major supporting sentence II          :

Ø  There was a tall man who has long hair walked along the street and bring “free hugs” sign.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  At first the people didn’t have a good response to him.

Ø  Maybe they though that the man was crazy. 

Ø  No one wanted to close with him

3.      Major supporting sentence III         :

Ø  And then, some minutes later there was a grandmother came to him and hugs him.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  It was the turning point caused the free hugs to begin to happen.

4.      Major supporting sentence IV         :

Ø  After the grandmother, there was a girl who wanted to hug him.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  And one by one person wanted to hug him. After that, some people joined to bring the “free hugs” sign.

Ø  They hugged each other.

5.      Major supporting sentence V          :

Ø   I think when they hugged each other, they felt so happy.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  They felt that they’re not alone in this world. It’s full of togetherness.

6.      Major supporting sentence VI         :

Ø  But, suddenly the police came and stopped the campaign.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  They didn’t give any permission to them to hug there.

Ø   I think it’s because the police though that this activity disturbed the people who walked on the street.

7.      Major supporting sentence VII        :

Ø  After the police stop the campaign, the people tried to submit the signature.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø   It means that the people who put the signature supported this activity.

Ø  There are many people who interested with this part.

Ø  One by one people put their signature there.

Ø  From 83, 136, 572 and finally he got 10.000 signatures.

8.      Major supporting sentence VIII      :

Ø  In the end, the man and the people hugged each other.

                  Minor supporting sentences :

Ø They looked so happy.

9.      Major supporting sentence IX         :

Ø People who didn’t know each other, at the end become knowing each other.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø .It made they’re aware each other.

10.  Concluding sentence                       :

The main point is in this world the togetherness is decreasing. The people don’t care each other. But, with “free hug”, it makes the people realize that togetherness is very important. They try to care each other. When they hugged each other, they felt so happy. They realize that they’re not alone in this world. There are people who always want to help them anytime. Sometimes, a hug is all what we need. With a hug, we can feel more comfortable and more confident because we have many people who always support us.