Writing
2 Assignment
Outline
of Widya’s post entitled “Free Hugs”
Topic
Sentence : Free hug is an activity which hug other people to share
our love and
happiness.
(I think it should be “an activity which hugs” not “an
activity which hug”)
1. Major
supporting sentence I :
Ø
With
hug, we can realize that many people care about us.
Minor supporting
sentences :
Ø
Hug
is one way to keep the togetherness in our society because we cannot life
without the other people, and that’s why togetherness is very important for us.
2. Major
supporting sentence II :
Ø There was a tall man who has long hair
walked along the street and bring “free hugs” sign.
Minor supporting
sentences :
Ø
At
first the people didn’t have a good response to him.
Ø
Maybe
they though that the man was crazy.
Ø
No
one wanted to close with him
3. Major
supporting sentence III :
Ø
And
then, some minutes later there was a grandmother came to him and hugs him.
Minor
supporting sentences :
Ø
It
was the turning point caused the free hugs to begin to happen.
4. Major
supporting sentence IV :
Ø
After
the grandmother, there was a girl who wanted to hug him.
Minor
supporting sentences :
Ø
And one by one person wanted to hug him. After that, some people
joined to bring the “free hugs” sign.
Ø
They
hugged each other.
5. Major
supporting sentence V :
Ø
I think when they hugged each other,
they felt so happy.
Minor supporting
sentences :
Ø
They
felt that they’re not alone in this world. It’s full of togetherness.
6. Major
supporting sentence VI :
Ø
But,
suddenly the police came and stopped the campaign.
Minor
supporting sentences :
Ø
They
didn’t give any permission to them to hug there.
Ø
I think it’s because the police though
that this activity disturbed the people who walked on the street.
7. Major
supporting sentence VII :
Ø
After
the police stop the campaign, the people tried to submit the signature.
Minor
supporting sentences :
Ø
It means that the people who put the
signature supported this activity.
Ø
There are many people who interested with this
part.
Ø
One by one people put their signature there.
Ø
From 83, 136, 572 and finally he got 10.000
signatures.
8. Major
supporting sentence VIII :
Ø
In
the end, the man and the people hugged each other.
Minor
supporting sentences :
Ø
They
looked so happy.
9. Major
supporting sentence IX :
Ø
People
who didn’t know each other, at the end become knowing each other.
Minor
supporting sentences :
Ø
.It
made they’re aware each other.
10. Concluding sentence :
The main point is in this world the togetherness is
decreasing. The people don’t care each other. But, with “free hug”, it makes
the people realize that togetherness is very important. They try to care each
other. When they hugged each other, they felt so happy. They realize that they’re
not alone in this world. There are people who always want to
help them anytime. Sometimes, a hug is all what we need. With a hug, we can
feel more comfortable and more confident because we have many people who always
support us.
