Free Hugs
Do you know about free hugs? A free hug is like hugs from
other people. We can see where a man who looks like crazy carrying
banners that read free hugs. Where a man who walks on the street to invite the other people joins to free hugs. First, a man
looks crazy with the banners that run in a city, but that man to do invite all
people to campaign for free hugs. Where the presence of free hugs we could feel
the love in the arms of each other and also get a sense of togetherness. Then, there
is the old women who first embraced that man, out of which began to arise to
bright light and the people began to think to do free hugs. From grandmother's
arms is clearly visible affection given radiance so that it can attract one by
one people to participate do free hugs. Then, everyone hugged each other and to
make each other happy ambience in the city. When many people have embraced each
other and bring the paper that said free hugs, there are several policemen who
dismiss their activities and ban the people hugging. But it doesn’t to make
those people to stop hugging and doesn’t make the first man to give up free
hugs to everyone. Then, the man signatures request to everyone who participated
in the activities of free hugs. The man get 10,000 signatures from the people
and able to convince the police would mean that hug and assure that the hug is
a sense of compassion for the people who loved like their own family. Finally,
the police agree with the free hugs campaign and the officers also huge each other
with all of people. In the end everyone was hugging each other.
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We have seen of the free hugs, we can start
to hug each other people, because the arms of a love for each other and will
also lead to a sense of family with each other, as teletabis movie we've ever
seen, where they hugged each other and take care of each other. In the end,
it's time we do and say 3 important words. Those are "keep free hugs"..jpg)
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"FREE HUGS''
it would be better if u can separate the paragraph. one big idea for one paragraph.
BalasHapusThank you for your advice candra, but I want to show something different so that the reader will be looking for his own and want to know what the real meaning of the passage and topics above, so not cheap for others to guess.
BalasHapushehehe
It's good yogik..
BalasHapusYou make the summary of the video.
But, I think I agree with candra, maybe you can separate it into some paragraph..
At first, I'm so confuse about your sentence, because its so difficult to understand. But, in the end, I can understand it clearly.
I also really like the pictures, especially the teletubies picture.
thank you yogik :)
I am sorry widya if you confuse about my sentence, can you show me the difficult sentence for me ?
BalasHapushehehe, I also like that pictures Teletubis are always each together.
your sentence in the beginning paragraph yogik.
BalasHapusI need to read more than once to try to understand it.. maybe you need to make it simpler.. :)
Generally, I think you have to make the topic sentence clearly because I think your topic sentence is not really complete. Maybe you can add some word which can make the topic sentence more interesting. For example, A free hug is hug from other people which makes us share our love and happiness. You also need to try to put full stop or period in your sentence, because at first it’s so difficult for me to understand what do you mean. Sometimes, you put a sentence which is not really needed in your paragraph. You have to pay attention about this, because that sentence can decrease the meaning of your paragraph. Your grammar is not too bad, but you still need to do more exercise about that.
BalasHapusGood job yogik.. :)