Final Assignment Writing 2 ( Putu Yogi Agustia Pratama )

Attending a small college has several advantages for foreign students

International students who attend small colleges in cities have many opportunities that make their educational experience unique. Small colleges offer students nurturing staff, small classes, and a cohesive student body. For many students, a small college in a city is the perfect match for their educational needs. The advantages of small colleges are class size and the seriousness in study. The teacher will be easier to watch over the students in the classroom. It is easier to communicate because you know each other very well. Small classes can lead to a better relationship between professors and students. There is possibility of break of chaos in middle out of class.

 If we are study in the small colleges the tuition’s Cost will be cheaper rather than a big college in the city. Where we can see there are small classes in the small college and the students are a lower rather than a big college. So, that can make the tuition’s cost will be cheaper. Even thought, it could be comfortable to study in the class. Where the student will feel enjoy to study, because there are nothing commotion will happen if study in the small college and classes. The student feels has a much closer relationship to teachers and staff than they are would at a large college, and they are more comfortable participating in class because of the small class size. And also the students and the teacher will be more flexible to do process of teaching and studying. Students are able to work directly with the teacher and receive individualized attention. This close relationship benefits both the students who excel in their field of study and the students who may need extra help in a subject.

Resource: http://www.indianstudentguide.in/articles/small-colleges-in-cities.htm

Outline of Free Hugs

Topic Sentence                   : Free hug is an activity which hug other people to share

              our love and  happiness.

            (I think it should be “an activity which hugs” not “an activity which hug”)

1.      Major supporting sentence I            :

Ø  With hug, we can realize that many people care about us.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  Hug is one way to keep the togetherness in our society because we cannot life without the other people, and that’s why togetherness is very important for us.

2.      Major supporting sentence II          :

Ø  There was a tall man who has long hair walked along the street and bring “free hugs” sign.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  At first the people didn’t have a good response to him.

Ø  Maybe they though that the man was crazy. 

Ø  No one wanted to close with him

3.      Major supporting sentence III         :

Ø  And then, some minutes later there was a grandmother came to him and hugs him.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  It was the turning point caused the free hugs to begin to happen.

4.      Major supporting sentence IV         :

Ø  After the grandmother, there was a girl who wanted to hug him.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  And one by one person wanted to hug him. After that, some people joined to bring the “free hugs” sign.

Ø  They hugged each other.

5.      Major supporting sentence V          :

Ø   I think when they hugged each other, they felt so happy.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  They felt that they’re not alone in this world. It’s full of togetherness.

6.      Major supporting sentence VI         :

Ø  But, suddenly the police came and stopped the campaign.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  They didn’t give any permission to them to hug there.

Ø   I think it’s because the police though that this activity disturbed the people who walked on the street.

7.      Major supporting sentence VII        :

Ø  After the police stop the campaign, the people tried to submit the signature.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø   It means that the people who put the signature supported this activity.

Ø  There are many people who interested with this part.

Ø  One by one people put their signature there.

Ø  From 83, 136, 572 and finally he got 10.000 signatures.

8.      Major supporting sentence VIII      :

Ø  In the end, the man and the people hugged each other.

                  Minor supporting sentences :

Ø They looked so happy.

9.      Major supporting sentence IX         :

Ø People who didn’t know each other, at the end become knowing each other.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø .It made they’re aware each other.

10.  Concluding sentence                       :

The main point is in this world the togetherness is decreasing. The people don’t care each other. But, with “free hug”, it makes the people realize that togetherness is very important. They try to care each other. When they hugged each other, they felt so happy. They realize that they’re not alone in this world. There are people who always want to help them anytime. Sometimes, a hug is all what we need. With a hug, we can feel more comfortable and more confident because we have many people who always support us.

EED 8th Classroom

EED 8^th Classroom

EED (English Education Department) 8^th Classroom is a very uncomfortable place for study. Many facilities in the classroom are broken or not working properly, so some facilities that supposed to support the learning process had turned to be a problem instead. Some broken chairs pilled in the back of the class and it makes the class looks untidy. There are many windows are broken, some windows we can’t open and some others can’t close. The curtains are dirty and out of order. The walls are dirty with meaningless drawing, writing and stains. The plugs on the floor are not working, so we can’t use it like how it supposed to, such as for charging our laptop or some other things that need plugs. The ACs on the class are not working, one of them even become a place for bird to make nest. The class also can be so noisy. First, on the other side of the building where the class is located there is a busy road, so we could hear the sound of vehicles moving very clearly and it disturb our study especially when we need to listen to an important lecture. Second, there are many benches outside the 8^th class where some students usually wait for their classes and the sound of their chatting sometimes are very loud. Outside of the class are very crowded and it also disturb our focus when studying. The reason why it is very crowded no other because the 8^th class is near a space, a place where students usually wait for their classes, so many students usually flock around there. It is also near the toilets and HMJ room. Broken facilities, noises around the class and the crowded outside the class are the causes that make us feel very disturbed during our lessons. If there is no action to improve the class condition we afraid it will affects our study performance.

Writing 2 Assignment

Outline of Widya’s post entitled “Free Hugs”

Topic Sentence                   : Free hug is an activity which hug other people to share

              our love and  happiness.

            (I think it should be “an activity which hugs” not “an activity which hug”)

1.      Major supporting sentence I            :

Ø  With hug, we can realize that many people care about us.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  Hug is one way to keep the togetherness in our society because we cannot life without the other people, and that’s why togetherness is very important for us.

2.      Major supporting sentence II          :

Ø  There was a tall man who has long hair walked along the street and bring “free hugs” sign.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  At first the people didn’t have a good response to him.

Ø  Maybe they though that the man was crazy. 

Ø  No one wanted to close with him

3.      Major supporting sentence III         :

Ø  And then, some minutes later there was a grandmother came to him and hugs him.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  It was the turning point caused the free hugs to begin to happen.

4.      Major supporting sentence IV         :

Ø  After the grandmother, there was a girl who wanted to hug him.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  And one by one person wanted to hug him. After that, some people joined to bring the “free hugs” sign.

Ø  They hugged each other.

5.      Major supporting sentence V          :

Ø   I think when they hugged each other, they felt so happy.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  They felt that they’re not alone in this world. It’s full of togetherness.

6.      Major supporting sentence VI         :

Ø  But, suddenly the police came and stopped the campaign.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  They didn’t give any permission to them to hug there.

Ø   I think it’s because the police though that this activity disturbed the people who walked on the street.

7.      Major supporting sentence VII        :

Ø  After the police stop the campaign, the people tried to submit the signature.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø   It means that the people who put the signature supported this activity.

Ø  There are many people who interested with this part.

Ø  One by one people put their signature there.

Ø  From 83, 136, 572 and finally he got 10.000 signatures.

8.      Major supporting sentence VIII      :

Ø  In the end, the man and the people hugged each other.

                  Minor supporting sentences :

Ø They looked so happy.

9.      Major supporting sentence IX         :

Ø People who didn’t know each other, at the end become knowing each other.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø .It made they’re aware each other.

10.  Concluding sentence                       :

The main point is in this world the togetherness is decreasing. The people don’t care each other. But, with “free hug”, it makes the people realize that togetherness is very important. They try to care each other. When they hugged each other, they felt so happy. They realize that they’re not alone in this world. There are people who always want to help them anytime. Sometimes, a hug is all what we need. With a hug, we can feel more comfortable and more confident because we have many people who always support us.

Writing 2 Assignment

Outline of Widya’s post entitled “Free Hugs”

Topic Sentence                   : Free hug is an activity which hug other people to share

              our love and  happiness.

            (I think it should be “an activity which hugs” not “an activity which hug”)

1.      Major supporting sentence I            :

Ø  With hug, we can realize that many people care about us.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  Hug is one way to keep the togetherness in our society because we cannot life without the other people, and that’s why togetherness is very important for us.

2.      Major supporting sentence II          :

Ø  There was a tall man who has long hair walked along the street and bring “free hugs” sign.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  At first the people didn’t have a good response to him.

Ø  Maybe they though that the man was crazy. 

Ø  No one wanted to close with him

3.      Major supporting sentence III         :

Ø  And then, some minutes later there was a grandmother came to him and hugs him.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  It was the turning point caused the free hugs to begin to happen.

4.      Major supporting sentence IV         :

Ø  After the grandmother, there was a girl who wanted to hug him.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  And one by one person wanted to hug him. After that, some people joined to bring the “free hugs” sign.

Ø  They hugged each other.

5.      Major supporting sentence V          :

Ø   I think when they hugged each other, they felt so happy.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  They felt that they’re not alone in this world. It’s full of togetherness.

6.      Major supporting sentence VI         :

Ø  But, suddenly the police came and stopped the campaign.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø  They didn’t give any permission to them to hug there.

Ø   I think it’s because the police though that this activity disturbed the people who walked on the street.

7.      Major supporting sentence VII        :

Ø  After the police stop the campaign, the people tried to submit the signature.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø   It means that the people who put the signature supported this activity.

Ø  There are many people who interested with this part.

Ø  One by one people put their signature there.

Ø  From 83, 136, 572 and finally he got 10.000 signatures.

8.      Major supporting sentence VIII      :

Ø  In the end, the man and the people hugged each other.

                  Minor supporting sentences :

Ø They looked so happy.

9.      Major supporting sentence IX         :

Ø People who didn’t know each other, at the end become knowing each other.

Minor supporting sentences :

Ø .It made they’re aware each other.

10.  Concluding sentence                       :

The main point is in this world the togetherness is decreasing. The people don’t care each other. But, with “free hug”, it makes the people realize that togetherness is very important. They try to care each other. When they hugged each other, they felt so happy. They realize that they’re not alone in this world. There are people who always want to help them anytime. Sometimes, a hug is all what we need. With a hug, we can feel more comfortable and more confident because we have many people who always support us.